All Comments on 'Hotel Humiliation Ch. 01'

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rockslyderockslydealmost 7 years ago
Well written

I don't generally like SPH stories , but yours is written tastefully. Leaves me wondering what's next in this "little" saga.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I'd like that to be me...

...apart from the tiny cock, of course!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Fucking great

Can't wait for chapter 2!!!!

Midnightowl19Midnightowl19almost 7 years ago
Superb piece of writing

You capture all the thoughts, desires, and emotions of what a SPH fan experiences perfectly, with an articulate and yet succinct description of the scene. Keep up the great work and roll out the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
More

So great. Need to see what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
lame

Had potential, but i hate chastity cage bullshit

halfsackhalfsackalmost 7 years ago
Nice

Nice story; I look forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
More...

Loved the chastity cage...

As he's got such a small cocklet, perhaps he should be shaved to humiliate him and to make him look more like a little boy?

Maybe he should be trained so that he can only cum when he's in his chastity device?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Realistic and hot

Great story. The way you set it up and had it develop was really excellent. Your dialogue was great - hot and yet also very believable. Nice touch to include the guy's length. I think that makes for a better story when the guy's pathetic length is mentioned. Looking forward to the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
absolutely fantastic

I love it. I hope you continue. I love both her sweet but honest humiliation as well as her cruel biting dominance. Cant wait for more

darthnader19darthnader19over 6 years ago

Excellent got me all hard cant wait for the next part

spaceinvaderspaceinvaderover 6 years ago

Fantastic. Measuring with a ruler is cruel. Great humiliating dirty talk from her too!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great story

A real femdom would make him put it on

krafttykrafttyalmost 6 years ago
more story

I would love to read about what happen during that long night.

minimicrorosarinominimicrorosarinoover 5 years ago
nice story

Good work, really enjoyed you story. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
5 stars

Nicely written. I have a small penis (1+1/2" flaccid, 3+1/2" erect) and just one, very small testicle; and I adore being humiliated. I have employed prostitutes on many occasions, most of whom seem to take a particular pleasure in being in charge and dishing out the humiliation.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Continue

I like it, but I think your really just scratching the surface here. Always make them eat there cum fo humiliation. Lick if off the ruler and her dress, not just a finger. Let her bring in a friend and expose him to others. Dig deeper. Humiliate more. Get mean.

jaybee994jaybee994almost 4 years ago
not bad

i like it nice plot i would like more verbal humiliation. looking forward to part 2..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
nice story

Thanks for your amazing stories.

nice story, I think it is good, that he doesn't have to eat his cum. I think it is good, when they are just mocked about their size and nothing to humiliating. really nice twist at the end, great detail, the woman sounds great,

I have a recommandation for another story, you could write about a guy, who has a long maybe 6,5 inches or more long dick, but who has a skinny dick like 4.5 inches girth or so. and that he realizes, it is all about he girth, condome size, pleasure of women, the feeling of being filled up etc. Maybe He believed that he was big, but he is only long, but skinny. Mabye his first girlfreind never said anything, but now in college he realizes it, with his friends with benefits or girlfreinds. and maybe he meets his ex. The writing style of your "Revealed" story is awesome.

Sorry for my English.

farnorthhotfarnorthhotover 3 years ago
Great!

Loved it! As a submissive with a small penis I was right there with him. Thank you. I'm very aroused!

slavecaroslavecaroover 3 years ago
A hollow strapon penis

How about being forced into shopping with her and using a hollow strapon penis that "she can actually feel."

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great start!

rbw65Xrbw65X7 months ago

Good beginning. I hope you continue.

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