All Comments on 'On the corner of Market & India...'

poem that makes me sit back and stare, with my hands folded together on my stomach. I like the run-on feel of this one, the lack of most punctuation. Good job!

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I love "spitting through missing letter teeth"! A vibrant and engaging poem, JD4G!

powerful messages and great examples of show don't tell.

I do see the other commenters point of the run on feel, but I could have used a space here or there I get dizzy reading so many short lines all in a row like that ...

maybe Ijust need a drink of water

~anna

I love the way this poem builds on itself, and then decays.

You build so well, from foundation to flourish. Very nice.

Thank you.