Awesome story! I hate to see it end. But then again, I can always re-read it!
Wasn't as hot as some of the others, but still all the same, it was great.
The story was amazing! you are an amazing writer, you should write books! SO GOOD! i cannot express how good this story is on words. you are an amazing writer.
i believe this is the best ive ever read. it was close to what my wife does to me on a regular basis;will read more of your work if i can
"Amy the Nurse's Aid" is an excellent story. To begin with the writing is technically competent--grammar, syntax, spelling, etc. The teasing scenes are vivid and exciting, but they fit into a well-constructed story. There is plot, characters, continuity, and suspense. There's even a bit of conflict. Some scenes are very serious, while others give some comic relief.
Keep up the good work, Peter.
Exquisite. This is one of my all-time favorite stories, and has been since I first discovered it online 5 or 6 years ago. Great to find it again on Literotica. The many scenes of denial are well-written and extremely exciting. Can't wait to re-read your other stories here!
I really enjoyed reading this. Excellent.
That was incredible. Like a bestseller, I couldn't stop reading it.
Amazing story. I wish that it would never end :( This is big fantasy of mine
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!
orBack to Amy the Nurse's Aide Ch. 13-14
orMore submissions by Peter_.
Edit comment orSubmit Comment
Comment posted successfully - click here to view it or write another.
Title of your comment:
Your public comment about Amy the Nurse's Aide Ch. 13-14:
Please type in the security codeYou may also listen to a recording of the characters.
Title your feedback:
Your feedback to Peter_:
If you would like a response, enter your email address in this box:
Feedback sent successfully - click here to write another.
Login or Sign Up
All contents © Copyright 1998-2012. Literotica is a trademark. No part may be reproduced in any form without explicit written permission.
Terms Of Services|Report A Problem|Privacy
Password:Forgot your password?
Your current user avatar, all sizes:
You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.
Select new user avatar:
Upload and save
User avatar uploaded successfuly and waiting for moderation.