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nice!
I like your poem, it's creative, fun, and sexy
out of this world
Great poem.
jet-fuel(e)d
*This is your poem. This is your poem not on thermometers. Any questions?
Your poem
has been mentioned on the poetry review thread
Star Spangled Seduction
is a poem in and of itself. I'm glad all that tuition is paying off for you, TT2U!
Excellent!
It's cosmically erotic. What a concept. :)
I saw one typo, but who cares, lol. You write beautifully.
Out
of this world!!
Good stuff!! >^..^
Loved It
Very erotic, very put together, and wonderfully written.
Celestial
wonderfully cohesive...
Another goody
You have wonderful choice of words in your poetry. And, again, the free verse was done greatly with no stumbling over words. Terrible job!
AS WITH ALL STATEMENTS
they must start with a theory. TK U MLJ LV NV
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