All Comments on 'Beach Heat'

by ricky999

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Loved It!

Lucky Bastard. I would love to meat up with a cut guy and get fucked on the beach. Really hott!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

this story was really good!!! i admit, i have read better, yet i have read worse as well!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Just Fucking Wonderful!

Well Ricky, for your first story I don't know how you could have improved it before posting! I look forward to more erotic stories in the future, thanks ~ Craig

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Better lust next time....

The "old" guy on the blanket would have sucked you dry, the guy in speedos had the tightest hole ever and that stalker fucked both of them with the biggest cock on the beach that day. Pity you were so focused on falling asleep waiting for the shadow of your dreams. Better lust next time......

dinkybootsdinkybootsalmost 12 years ago

no one loves a fairy after they hit forty.? enjoy it while you can it wont last.?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Very nice, four stars from me. hope to see more from you!

starovastarovaover 8 years ago
Good first story.

I have had beach encounters and there is a ring of authenticity in the build up in this story.

I like to see the resolution of moral dilemmas, or tension of being seen, or a slow uncertain reluctant seduction in stories of first encounters. I thought two strangers anal fucking one another on their first encounter was a little unlikely.

Great to see good spelling and grammar from a competent writer. Keep writing.

Shanklin27Shanklin27almost 4 years ago
Hot story

Makes me wish I was at the beach!

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