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by doormouse08/11/04

Whoa!!

You tell him!!!! LOL

Remind me to never piss you off ;-)

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by lostandfounder08/12/04

So you like the other woman?

Kidding! You leave no room for misunderstanding here! The rhythm was a little forced, but the emotion more than makes up for it. Favorite line...
The lies like worms come out
I think we've all bitten on that apple once or twice. Good poem.

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