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Angeline Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by LKinko08/17/04

Great Start!

Definitely looking forward to the next chapter!

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by Anonymous11/28/04

WOW!

I almost came with her! When is the next chapter?

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by English Lady12/14/04

Well written,..

A wonderful opening though "it was all a dream" seems a little jaded :) It is a good beginning and I can see an interesting story coming from it :)

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