All Comments on 'Cumming of Age'

Where's part 2?????????

looking forward to reading part 2

That was lots of fun to read. Plain, simple no frills just the I like it. I can hardly wait to read how she takes the

12 1/2" "girfriend" thanks you too (lol)

12,5 inch?????-sometimes fantasy should be more realistic!-i think for this novel 8-9 inches is ENOUGH!!

That was sooooooooooo hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

When you define the story by the size of your pecker, you're waning for writing materials.

Keep working on the concepts.

You reused the same phrases over and over. "...for all she was worth" is in almost every paragraph, and it's in at least one of them more than once. Also, 12.5" penis and 8" balls? That's unrealistic, not to mention unattractive from a female's perspective. The gist of the story could have been good, but it was poorly executed.

wow

More Cum'll Cum Out, Tomorrow! ?

Its a tragedy that you dont use any personal speech.

The entire story sounds plain, there is no interaction between characters, everything is retold by the main character.

Its more like someone would write in a diary.

Personal speech gives your story depth and gives your characters life.

Jesus christ, you're a psychologist's wet dream. Never - even on this site - have I seen so many examples of a person demanding attention than with your many claims about your balls and dick. You don't have to keep telling us how big or beautiful you think they are, as long as you believe it, why should we?

"I actually measured it once and measuring from the top, it came in at 12 1/2 inches."

Wow, someone's lying through their teeth.

Didn't bother reading after the first few lines

Stopped after the first sentence of the second paragraph. I know this is a fantasy; 12.5 inches long; estimate 6 inch girth that is less then 1.0% of the total men in the world. Including those under 15 years of age. Try 7.5 to 8 inches long with the 6 inch girth.

Ever young man's, a beautiful older big boobed woman who is enthralled with his cock. A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.