All Comments on 'The Selection Ch. 04'

by S. Stevenson

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
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cant wait to read more

cheveuxrouxcheveuxrouxover 19 years ago
Wonderful!

Once again you amaze me, please keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Wondering

This story should be rate as hot like the rest of this writter's work.

steven857steven857over 8 years ago
Your story is well done

Your story is well done although due to personal preference I do not share what is mine with others. I found it strange he was will to share Angel, he was careful about STD's in the first story but here he opened up the possibility for all sorts of STD's some that take six month before a person tests positive.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
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Rap isn't wrap and steal isn't steel... It kept me from enjoying the story

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