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Lucky with the Landlords Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by don8765408/17/04

Outstanding...More than outstanding!!!!

Finally, an author on this site wrote a story that was worth reading in these fantasy stories. I loved the way they fucked and the way she advised after he had cum in her that she and her hubby were trying to get pregnant, as if he had taken care of that with his cumming in her. Now will it continue, possibly with "Jim" not knowing that the baby is not his and continuing to live with her to become the baby's legal daddy? Perhaps they can continue to give this baby a few siblings? Please continue with this outstanding story.

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by gotwaves08/17/04

Hot, Very Hot!

Great story!

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by Anonymous08/18/04

WOW-some

great story. hot. keep it coming

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by Anonymous08/19/04

TOP NOTCH!

Once again, you have written a HOT story! Keep it up!

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by Asgard08/20/04

Outstanding!

I can only join you all, this is an outstanding h-o-t story,really absolute top class!
Keep the story running!!!

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by Anonymous09/15/04

Another Hot One!

A fantastic story. I loved the landlord stories. I was so turned on I almost came myself reading them. This was so close to what I have been feeling lately with a boyfriend.
Keep up the great writing and I will keep reading. Maybe next one will make me cum. LOL Thank you!

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by Anonymous11/14/05

wonderful

I was turned on so much that I could not jack my penis fast enough. I hope he made her pregnant.

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by Anonymous09/12/06

great details of a thief fuck

This is how a fuck story should be written, with a sense of truth , thru details . I felt that this was my experience, but please find a reasonable ending for a brilliant conclusion. Normally I prefer to read stories by women , who capture details much better. But this one got me good. Thanks

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by Anonymous11/02/06

So FUCKING good

Such a good story made me so hot. Loved it heaps. good work

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