All Comments on 'My Roommate'

Nicely written with tensions building up to a 'happy ending'.

Proves that a juicy story with lots of emotion needs not always be pages long.

Do write more, please!

Very steaming and erotic. True life is usually hotter than fiction. Thanks for a great read!

Nicely done. Loved the slow and teasing development. Your writing is great as anyone who reads this can visualize themselves as one of the characters. The mark of a good story.

Definitely well done...the build up...the smoldering passion...sublime!!!!! Thanks for this one!

I find it interesting (and sexually interesting and stimulating) that, when the boyfriend was naked in the kitchen, you saw or made a comment only on the size of his cock -- no other sexual characteristics mentioned. When he came home hot and sweaty with the shirt partially open, THEN you notice and mention the chest hair. Seems you were falling for him more and more just as he was falling for you. Welcome to real love. Long may you love and live in that love! Please continue your great story!

Thank you for this well written story. Loved it. So true and accurate. Please write more!

well written and so plausible

I really enjoyed your story thank you for taking the time to write

I'll check out your other work.

I really enjoyed the small sarcastic parts!

I hope you add more stories!