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What can I say?
first six lines grabbed me
followed it through
yeh I liked the rhythm
the flow and the laughter
but the question
that was asked
sadly went unanswered
Enjoyed
this vignette of yours with the thoughts entwined. Cleverly designed images delivered with a swagger. Thanks
As neonurotic said...
..."delivered with a swagger". Just be careful not to swagger when you're one beer short.
ignoring the line breaks,
I found a fantastic poem. I think you should go back and steal the clock.
hard to vote
I hope you don't pay any attention to your voting scores, DA: I have had to use a new scale. Your worst get 4's from me despite the fact they are 6's compared with most of lit! Another remarkable offering.
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