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so i can rest my elbow on her hip

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by Tathagata08/15/04

Yeah

that " not drinking enough beer to get a buzz" headache sucks.
Never heard anyone else mention it.
I love the way this ends...with the lotion smell.
I like your stuff alot
Write on brother

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by jd4george08/16/04

Oh, the things I've chewed...

"very slowly until
it doesn't taste
like anything but
dead animal"

I'm curious about the lines breaks, although it doesn't matter.

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by WickedEve08/16/04

I like this poem. I like it a lot.

I don't like the line breaks. Stop with the choppy line breaks or I will bitch slap you, DA. lol

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