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am I
the only one that sees genius in your descriptive powers? I certainly hope not...excellent short story here, DA, yeah, I know,,,anyway, I loved it ;)
There
is something in your work that is universal and personal at the same time.
we can all say " yeah been there" but it is still You.
It's a great gift you have
I tried to find something I didn't like.
If I try really hard, it's the word "velvet"...
I agree with the concensus: "been there, done that, you made me feel it again... been there, done that, you made me feel it again... been there, done that, you made me feel it again..."
sigh
I love
it but
the line
breaks
are
bugging me damn
it!
:)
no no thermometers
so good...
...yeah.
~~
A rather one-sided relationship in Alison's favor
Despite the way she got you off so quick;
She had you so controlled.
possessive
A controlling woman ~ who assumes and maintains command of her Lover's life.
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