All Comments on 'Alison'

the only one that sees genius in your descriptive powers? I certainly hope not...excellent short story here, DA, yeah, I know,,,anyway, I loved it ;)

is something in your work that is universal and personal at the same time.

we can all say " yeah been there" but it is still You.

It's a great gift you have

If I try really hard, it's the word "velvet"...

I agree with the concensus: "been there, done that, you made me feel it again... been there, done that, you made me feel it again... been there, done that, you made me feel it again..."

I love

it but

the line

breaks

are

bugging me damn

it!

:)

no no thermometers

...yeah.

A rather one-sided relationship in Alison's favor

Despite the way she got you off so quick;

She had you so controlled.

A controlling woman ~ who assumes and maintains command of her Lover's life.