All Comments on 'Hello Mr. Robinson Pt. 11'

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hardheadd1hardheadd1almost 7 years ago

Great story as always.

SnigelsmedSnigelsmedover 6 years ago
Thank you!

This series started out good with a few errors, but the story telling more than made up for those.

Now the errors are (for me) hard to find and this epic is sweeping you away to another world, and outer space! I like how the beginning is more mundane (*cough*) with character development and setting a baseline for the story. Then before you know it, your (LB's) imagination runs away with this world. All possibilities are possible, you dont know where it will go next, you feel like a kid dreaming and fantasizing about the world, not limited to what is "known".

Thanks for a wonderfull experience! Best wishes!

ChaosCowboyChaosCowboyover 6 years ago
Awesome

I've enjoyed the entire series you've created so far, and I hope that this isn't the end of the story. Its nice to see the additional development of each character over the length of the saga and I do hope there will be more to come.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
great story of of your best

just finished reading all 11 chapters would love to read more of Hello Mr. Robinson to see what happens to the earth and does his daughter ever return to him full time after finishing work or does she join him on another planet should earth fail to make the changes what happens to Lydia does she get re-elected or does she leave politics and moves in with Greg and the others time will tell I guess please continue this story

sali6435sali6435almost 6 years ago
just reread HMR

its still one of many stories I would love to see finnished. I know your busy but do give this a place on the to do list. as always a huge fan of your work keep giving us gold to read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
wow

ok Lost Boy, awesome. I love sci fi novels and have really enjoyed literotica over the last 2 months. Pls keep this story going. You could sell a series of books based on this and other related stories of yours. Loving it, thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Pls more

Pls continue this. Sci-fi, fantasy, erotica combined. Loved it.

WretchedMonkeyWretchedMonkeyover 5 years ago
I need to know.

This needs to continue/conclude.

Rapier875Rapier875over 5 years ago
This is going to be finished properly, isn't it !

After 11 long chapters, you seriously aren't thinking of leaving this unfinished - are you? I'm fed up with such antics on here.

But after a gap of 18 months, I guess the chances of it bring completed now are in the region of Zero. Consequently, I'm giving this chapter a 1 star.

I am distinctly unhappy right now.

Rapier

PokingdemonPokingdemonover 4 years ago
Book Series

Write a book series. Like seriously. Polish first bit up into a rough draft get it edited and push it until you find a publisher will publish your work. I'm telling you, you got gold here. And if anyone gives you crap about too much sex for sci-fi name drop L.K. Hamilton. ( I mean that in a way to say look at her books.)

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