All Comments on 'Sear'

gina, sis, that was wonderful. great imagery and passion.

i look forward to reading more from you.

gurl

Very nice, Gina. I can tell that there is a lot of emotion behind this, and that makes it very enjoyable for the reader. Keep up the good work!

I like this very much Gina, but I would like it more if it were trimmer. Lets have tea and chat about it, ok? Thanks, hon!

When I read it I could feel the heat you describe. I have felt that before. It is intense. Only that which brings the heat can cool your desires but it always leaves a yearning for more heat. Very good!

exellent poem one of the best ive read on lit so far

getting a grasp for your style of writing...original and always a mental tail spin twister of words...makes ya think...grin

pun intended....Gina you know what this did to me...

hi gina .....its the first of many readings of yoru poems i am sure to have ........show me more ...open that passion side that carnal side ....that folder of LUST of primalness you exhibit ......when we ,,,,,,,,,

average about you or this poem. Love the tactile heat in here, heat of every kind. Thank you. LJ