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by Anonymous

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by slavegurl08/16/04

wonderful

gina, sis, that was wonderful. great imagery and passion.
i look forward to reading more from you.
gurl

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by Anonymous08/16/04

Excellent

Very nice, Gina. I can tell that there is a lot of emotion behind this, and that makes it very enjoyable for the reader. Keep up the good work!

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by BooMerengue08/16/04

!

I like this very much Gina, but I would like it more if it were trimmer. Lets have tea and chat about it, ok? Thanks, hon!

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by Anonymous08/16/04

Feeling the Heat

When I read it I could feel the heat you describe. I have felt that before. It is intense. Only that which brings the heat can cool your desires but it always leaves a yearning for more heat. Very good!

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by Anonymous10/31/04

excellent poem

exellent poem one of the best ive read on lit so far

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by My Erotic Tale11/22/04

sear

getting a grasp for your style of writing...original and always a mental tail spin twister of words...makes ya think...grin

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by tubluvr@work03/06/05

Hot

pun intended....Gina you know what this did to me...

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by Anonymous03/09/05

i want more .............

hi gina .....its the first of many readings of yoru poems i am sure to have ........show me more ...open that passion side that carnal side ....that folder of LUST of primalness you exhibit ......when we ,,,,,,,,,

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by LadyJeanne03/09/05

Nothing

average about you or this poem. Love the tactile heat in here, heat of every kind. Thank you. LJ

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