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All Comments on 'Finding a Good Doctor'

by NightRAGES

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
where is the sex?

Did he fuck her or what?

DFWDOMDFWDOMover 19 years ago
Let them do the talking

Your stories all have good plots and interesting characters. My critical suggestion is to let the characters tell me what is happening, how they feel, how they see others.

TsukiKitTsukiKitalmost 15 years ago
Great one!

This is definitely a mind control story!!!

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