All Comments on 'Twin Share Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
hot

nice work, is that the end?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Excellent

Surely one more story - one family 'orgy' between parents and siblings before they go to college. Would be a grand finale.

prop69prop69almost 7 years ago
What a beautiful and tender story of family love.

Hope you have another chapter where everyone shares the love of family.

Mom shares with her son and Daddy and daughter.

Is the daughter required to say whose cum covers her face?

Will the twins be sharing an apartment or bedroom in college?

jtw0978jtw0978almost 7 years ago

How will you bring it to a close

ThitabeThitabealmost 7 years ago
Great story

At the end of Chapter 3 of Changing room, the mom says the family from next door have twins, a boy and a girl. I can see a chance to murge the two stories and have the mother/son couple from that story and the family from this story discover each other. maybe not as an orgy, but as a chance for the two families to be able to have somebody to talk to without fear. Who knows, with the twins gone off to school maybe their can be some exibitionism and the couples can have sex in front of each other. There are many possibilities.

sunburycdsunburycdalmost 7 years agoAuthor
Congrats Thitabe

You win the non-existant prize Thitabe, all my stories are interconnected in some way and you're actually the first to point it out. Thanks also to Prop69, and other commenters, love all your input.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Part 4?

Having a Part 4?

Dennis_TBL69Dennis_TBL69about 6 years ago
Cream pie clean outs

Wherebi the men switch to eat the opposite pussy they have filled as the girls clean the cockcycles... Love your story lines...

GrantLeeStoneGrantLeeStoneabout 5 years ago
There is no point to a Chapter 4

The conflict is resolved.

Amy has her photo. There’s no place for the story to go, except a list of sexual positions. This is a good, happy ending.

Joshuad2477sJoshuad2477sabout 5 years ago
Sorry but why did you ruin the story

So you wanted to write a porno. Congrats you did it and it ruined a potentially good story. Sorry but hated this story and the direction you took with it. Funny I saw how it would go with one sentence in the first chapter and forced myself to quick read thru this story. Lost all interest in the characters after the part about dad checking out the daughter. 1 star

Mr Wild willyMr Wild willyabout 5 years ago
Good, but a tad bit rushed!

I liked the story. I feel you could have added a couple more pages building the romance a bit and settled the ending in more than one sentence!

Rancher46Rancher46almost 3 years ago

Great story, but the end left you hanging. A 4th chapter and continuation of Amy's and Thomas sexual adventure is definitely needed. Well done to this point.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Wow, this was hot. I’m going to read this to my sister. I’ve been wanting to fuck her. Hopefully this helps

bshell47bshell47over 2 years ago
AWESOME family photos

A beautiful weekend of love and sharing.

Will there be more?

sunburycdsunburycdover 2 years agoAuthor

@bshell47 No plan on continuing this. The characters, Amy in particular, appear in other titles however. Glad you enjoyed this oldy.

Frankie1952Frankie1952over 2 years ago

Agree with Rancher46, Amy was falling for Thomas so I think you should explore their romance. Thomas never did get to cum in Amy either. They also havent had a good romp together which is really the point of this category.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So much more to tell. Swinging party at least

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A lot of good hot story packed into just a few pages of text, great job!! Keep going.

MADDOGINTEXASMADDOGINTEXASabout 2 years ago

Oh, what a shame you are not continuing the 'exciting times ahead'...you are such a TEASE with this story!

**5** Stars...

GeorgeGaleGeorgeGalealmost 2 years ago

Wonderful story, there is so much of this story that seems to be left untold..................():\

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Amazing! Surprised me! I surely hope there will. be more to this story....please!!!

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