All Comments on 'I crawl to you'

by Dee_Luscious

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
drop unneeded words and added needed

Ex/ "We roll the dice (IN) this game of chance

fire, desire, and circumstance

If you were to call it a big romance,"

You rhyme well---

in within skin begin win

then fall apart--- raw hunger sheets lover.

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