All Comments on 'Witches Brew'

That's the way fantasy should be written! Well done!

Really well done, would love to hear more on this story!!!

Very well written. Please continue the story.

great story, looking forward to the next part!!

Excellent! Can't wit for the next installment and what he will do with his new powers. Maybe when he gets home his family will be waiting.

... I hope you're going to continue this one!!

Great story!!! ;-)

Ow wow!

I loved your story!

I think it's very well written and I can't wait to read the next part of this story.

Please continue this story!

This was a great story. I hope that you either continue this idea or write something else, but anything from you will definately be a great fantasy. Keep it up, and you will make quite a few people very happy out there.

Throughout high school, taking part in a sex ritual with Goth girls/women was probably my most frequent fantasy. Great to see it realized on paper (er, computer screen). Totally sexy and totally awesome. Well done.

This is amazingly hot. It's rare for me to find a mind control fantasy that quite does it for me...but this is spot-on. Write more, if you have time!

i haven't read #2 yet, but count me in on the votes for a part 3. get on that :)

Such a nice story !!! Written by someone who really knows how to treat women !

This story sure gave me inspiration !

Thank you ;)

It needs some work. The sex scenes are rather juvenile.

Well done! Really enjoyed it. My only

Criticism is the guy would have def asked

What he was expected to do at the ritual.