All Comments on 'First Anal'

Would be so much better if ya cleaned up your grammar an spelling mistakes - next time take the time to read before posting - otherwise it is a good story

I'll take your comments on board, thank you for the advice.

I found it to be interesting. Sure, you could have changed some things, but something tells me you will get better as you move along and most importantly, thanks for writing it.

Your desire is intoxicating....mmmm

They happen at the most erotic times of the story - like the authors mind is racing through it again ...

got me off, I hope it's a true story.

Please write more anal scenes. I love to hear a woman's description of anal sex. All of my stories are anal but as a man my descriptions are colored by that fact. I write about how it feels to have my cock up a woman's tight asshole, but I really want to know how it feels to you.

Perfect! Short & sweet, the way it should be. Not trying to write a novel.