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Boo, such a sweet heart you have, and it spills out into grace all over your work. beautiful poem, made me smile, I would give you 27 more years + some :)
Old girl....
27 more is a lot to ask for, I hope you get it. Being
a old fart, I found this right up my alley. I love the
way it reads, you are speaking out into a now empty
room. If you can't get 27 more, spend more time at the beach. I love this poem.
This reminds me of
sewing circles and cracker barrels....it's sort of folksy..in a matter of fact, that's life kind of way.
Touched me...
* Lost the therm 27 years ago
Wow
there's so much in here, I'm still reeling. Thank you. LJ
I HOPE ON YOU A BETTER 27!
LETS HOPE YOU GET IT! MY EYES ARE WET!
Sexmate
relating LoL
Love, Passion, Karma, All The Mistresses gifts to be given or taken always earned, not always learned. the was a very honest heartbreaking poem, thank you for sharing it.
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Just 27 more years?
Sounds like you've just reached the mid-point
With at least another fifty to go...
Counting years.
The miracle of change ~ a welcome presense. I becomes we. May you float together toward all that's good, clean and honest. Beautifully evocative rendering.
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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LIFE GOES FULL CIRCLE
does any one want a 3rd. TK U MLJ LV NV
*****
Five.
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