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All Comments on 'Ocracoke : No Fools No Fun'

by sandspike

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Miss OatlashMiss Oatlashover 19 years ago
MMMMM

I doubt many people have ever been there...I have, a few times. Your description is perfect!

DustystarDustystarover 19 years ago
Jive and wail

Sand,

I was shakin' my groove thang to your tune. Good stuff, funky man.

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22over 19 years ago
your poem

has been mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

AngelineAngelineover 19 years ago
Sounds like a lyric!

I like this alot--it has a really nice rhythmic flow, and I've not been to Ocracoke, but I have been to the Outer Banks, and I feel the place in your poem. :)

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnover 19 years ago
I want to come

with you some time. Perfect rhythm, lovely rhyme.

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
cute

The rhyme made it a cute poem.

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