All Comments on 'Walking Lessons'

by MrIllusion

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OzBushrangerOzBushrangeralmost 7 years ago
A Great Read

This is a beautifully creative story, which is extremely well-written. It is very deserving of the five stars I have awarded.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Wonderful story.First rate !!

koinonia_92koinonia_92almost 7 years ago
More

Well written! Part 2 would be awesome!

WhitneymrWhitneymralmost 7 years ago

I hope there's a part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wow!! Great

Wow!! Great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
The best erotic story I have ever read!

This was so well-written and detailed! Both characters were believable and respectful and absolutely sexy as hell! Thank you!!

gulfmedic1gulfmedic1over 6 years ago
Great

Awesome story your best

arrowglassarrowglassover 6 years ago
I agree...such an erotic and sublime tale!

I hope there is a part 2 also!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great story

And I especially like it as I was lucky enough to have anal on the stage apron of the theatre after hours myself.

lwiltonlwiltonover 5 years ago
Theatre terminology

This was a darn good read and got lots of stars from me. But I'm pretty sure the author was never around the backstage of a theater or spent much time around a school of dramatic arts. So just for the information of anyone else setting stories there:

The "actor's room", the place that the actors and crew hang out, is the "green room".

Plays don't generally have premiers, that is more a term for a motion picture. A play "opens", and that happens on "opening night".

A typical dance studio room, except maybe a VERY poor one in someone's basement, doesn't usually have a single mirror that can be moved around or easily covered. Typically most or all of one wall is a mirror, and there is a hand rail (the bar, or more exactly barre) running along it's length.

It isn't unusual in a college theater complex for there to be an old mattress in an out-of-the-way place, and for it to get quite a lot of use, and very little of that sleeping.

bananapantsbananapantsover 5 years ago
Hot story

Very much enjoyed the eroticism of this story, have read most of your stories and thought this one is one of the best.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Flabbergasted

Mate. Whoever you are and wherever you are, let me tell you this thing: GET THIS PUBLISHED AS A FULL MOVIE. You are damn epic!

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