All Comments on 'Captured by the Elves Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
What is this?

The Lord of the Rings or World of Warcraft? Pretty silly.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
yeah more to read

can't wait for more. love to have the change happen to me.thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

I can't wait for the next chapter

nominadnominadover 6 years ago
Good

Great story! Cant wait the next chapter. Did he gonna scape someday? I hope so :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Awesome story

Can't wait for the next chapter! :D I actually want to see the prisoner give into the change, but if he tries to escape and somehow doesn't die, I guess that would be cool too. Hope to see more soon!

Writer345Writer345about 6 years ago
Progress?

When's the next part coming out? Surely you are not going to leave it as it is?

Sorry! Don't mean to be pushy - I know all about writer's block (suffering from it myself at the moment) - but this story is just too good to leave unfinished.

All the best,

Ken

notbreckenridgenotbreckenridgeabout 6 years agoAuthor

Working on it. Rough almost done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Take your time

I Love what what you have going here and would hate to see it rushed

RodimusMikeRodimusMikeover 4 years ago
Why is he resisting?

I mean to be able to turn into a Beautiful Elven Shemale would be blessing,and to be with not just Braith,but also Landa and Teagan and others would be a dream come true.Besides if he doesn't hurry up Landa and Teagan may end up killing him cause they don't trust him.

I just wish he would submit and let the change happen,he would be so much happier that way,and maybe Braith would marry her/him and she would love him enough to let her/him fuck her in the ass and let her cum so their bonding could be complete.This story is too precious let her/him die by arrow,so please convert her to an Elf Shemale.

enwaluenwaluabout 2 years ago

I would like to convert him in to a sissy,nuts almond size and her clitty reduced to a minimum.

ShortyMacShortyMac12 months ago

Oh my this just keeps getting better and better. Where is the planet of She Elves I want to go there. 🤤

You’re doing such a great job with this story, you keep upping the game… Now you get 15 hard stars.

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