All Comments on 'Holiday #195'

A perfect story about young love. Thank you.

We all should have been so fortunate. I usually write more when I comment but i find myself lost in nostalgic bliss. Thank you.

What I like most about this sweet story is how you totally captured the relationship between these two young lovers. And their first journey into awareness. Well done!

Wonderful.++

I hope you get as much attention as my 'Nude Bleach' has.

Well done. i will check out your others.

You took an incredibly awkward moment and turned it into a glorious event!! Combining their National Nude Day event with their First Time was perfect!! You have a great knack for writing, please keep writing!!

This is absolutely this best Nude Day story I have read so far, and I have read many. This story absolutely captures the meaning of young love and Nude Day. Hope you win the contest!

The best Nude day story of the year. Hands down! Funny, inventive, and well written. Thank you, Mike

What a fantastic story. The character development and the complete capture of all facets of their first nude experience and also first time sexually with anyone made a great storyline. Just sorry I didn't get to contribute to your vote tally for the competition as I enjoyed this far more than a lot of the other stories I read for the competition including the story which took first. Well done.

I enjoyed this so much. Lovely characters and dialogue, perfectly paced for my arousal and satisfaction by the end.

Nice story...read it straight through and was very entertained....

The voting was over when I got to see the competition. I started with the first and second prize winners, but while I enjoyed what I read I didn't even finish them (although I may go back later. I think they were just becoming too predictable, and at least one was heading into anal territory, which isn't to my taste.

Your story, however, I read and enjoyed right through. Great story, great erotica.

Now I'm going to have to go and read your other stories, although a quick check shows I've already read a couple.

Keep up the good work. I love it.

Ausvirgo is right. I apologize for my inexcusable, thoughtless failure.

Thanks for sharing your story-telling skill.

If only I'd read this before results were out...oh well.

The story was lighthearted and playful. Loved this take rather than the exhibitionism route. I think we all need an Amy in our lives :p

5 stars easy.

Nothing added that didn't need to be there and nothing left out. Wonderful story and excellent editing. Stories don't come any sweeter than this. Thanks.

Well -developed characters who let us be there with them. This is a sweet, erotic story. I'm sure happy to have had the chance to read it. Thank you.

LOVED IT. SPECIALLY THE WITTY BANTER. GREAT WORK.

I have not seen who won yet, but this lovely, tender story is among my top three. I will have to check to see if you have other submissions and read them all. Your writing is in my mind very accomplished. Other commenters have said it all as far as how and why this story is so warm, gentle and believable. I think you could make a living at this--maybe you do. Thank you for a gentle, happy celebration of human kind.

By far this is my favorite story on this site or any site. Not only is it well written but also tender and fun. It's too bad everyone's first time couldn't be like this couple's.

I love this story!

anymore like this will be greatly appreciated on here.

The Class Nudist is one of my all time favorites, and this is right up there with it!. You have a wonderful talent for combining innocence, romance and passion so that the sum is far greater than the parts! You do "First Time" better than any other writer on this site. Congratulations on another first place winner, no matter how many votes it got. Five stars do not do it justice.

Great build up, very nice tension. If you edit this, I would suggest making an erotic part about cleaning the cock off of sunscreen. I wouldn't want that delectable fine young pussy getting that horrible sunscreen up inside this beautiful woman.

wonderful romantic first time love story,, loved it,, well written, well paced,, the ending was rather abrupt though.

Great story! I love the tension in the beginning. The love and passion was innocent, fun, and realistic. I really liked Amy’s jokes. The ending was a tad rushed but it was still good and overall a great story. 17 stars!

A wonderful story.

Amy's choice of holiday to celebrate was certain to bring them closer--very much closer.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story from beginning to end. Thanks for posting.

That was a sweet story about real love and healthy sexuality. I’d love to see this re-enacted in a short film. Just a sweet story and very sexy.

I was part of a couple who got stuck in the friend zone, and neither realized the other's feelings until it was too late. I can totally relate to this story. Pete and Amy are totally believable. To me, this story should be even higher in the rankings.

Loved it ❤️

I have read, re-read, and re-re-re-read (and pasted it in separately on my computer) The Class Nudist. This too was an excellent story, a shade behind that one, but you have terrific talent for believable characters and scenes -- and I find it wonderful that both of them could better be categorized as romantic.

I couldn't help but smile all the way through this one.

Great story! I'd love to see how Oral Appreciation Day works out for them.

Thanks for sharing this piece.

Thoroughly enjoyable with solid grounding in reality. Thanks...

What a wonderful, beautiful story! I’ll never ignore those weird daily ‘holidays’ again. :-) The writing was impeccable. The characters not only believable but incredibly likable. I couldn’t help rooting for them from the first paragraph onward. When writing for the nat’l nude day contest, it’s difficult to come up with something new/novel yet still believable, and then thoroughly enjoyable to boot. You knocked it out of the park. So, so good.

Great build up, great interaction, great sex, great climax, great story. Thanks WC.

Cheers, Roger

This was honestly the best story I've read yet. I absolutely loved it. Thanks

Well done, very well done. Thank you from one dork to your two.

LWlurker

This is truly wonderful and so very well written. It captivated me from beginning to end and i have favoured it also. If there were a way, i would give you 50 stars, not just five

thank you so much for an entertaining read

I'm 78. This brought me back 63 years to my first time. Thank you. Just keep writing please. You are hitting the nail on thee head with your stories.

Nice to see an educated writer for a change, and what a wonderful story!

Sweet story. Made me wish I was one of the two characters.

One of the best!

Nice, brings back some nice memories....5 Stars

Excellent, thanks

excellent

Excellent story and wonderful writing skills. So many of the stories here are predictable or unrealistic or just gross...however this story is different. It is realistic, very erotic, and in my case did a fine job of triggering memories of past experiences of my own. Thank you!

A great mix of romance , fun, pleasure and excitement. Well done.

This is nice and sweet and natural and I loved it. I wish more smut was like this.

Third Excellent! Nothing left to say that wouldn't detract from how well this is told.

It's so nice to read a first time story that's not all angst-ridden and oh-so-serious. My first time was nothing like this one, and sixty years later I find myself green with envy.

Great story writing and such sweet characters.

What a sweet and touching love story. I loved the characters and how they interacted with each other. This story is a rare find here on Lit. I’m glad that I was able to read it.

Such a lovely and sweet story

Wonderful story, but the ending was so disappointing. I loved the dialogue and personality the pair had, the realistic awkwardness was perfect and I don't know why all erotic stories don't strive to contain that realism. But, the final intercourse was just completely skipped. The handjob and oral were described in detail over multiple paragraphs, but then the penetrative sex was skipped over with the "No cheesy porn music started playing" paragraph. Why was that not described in detail? The awkward, realistic dialogue was the best part of this story, and yet the penetrative sex was simply told to be as such without being described in detail as such. Otherwise a much better story than most.

Very Cute.

It was cute and sweet I liked it. Great piece of work.

Fantastic!!

Love all your stories! Wish you wrote more!!

Great story - so fun, completely believable. I had a friend like that in high school that I never followed through with. I thought of her often while reading. Thanks for that walk down memory lane.

Excellent story of best friends who became lovers. Thanks.

I especially loved the slow, ackward part of getting nude.

SO many 5 stars for your writing---slow burn, nice burn

Although from the beginning we sort of knew sex was coming, the way it was handled with the nude day, and then the romantic progression to having sex was really nice.

One of the best romances I've read, here. Nice pacing and characters.