All Comments on 'Alan's Thoughts Ch. 07'

Great story as always, glad to see it back, thought this one had died out. Hope this continues - you've mastered the art of having mind control stories where people have real personalities.

Oh, and it's souvenir :p

Please bring the nurse back later. That was one of the best written chapters I've seen on here in years, and it was definitely worthy of all 5 stars. Please keep up the amazing writing!

Hope Alan gets a welcome home sex orgy with at least 4 or 5 women. Also hope he gets to fuck the HR woman who pulled him into her office, the bitch who tattled on him and the woman living in his apartment building.

Like previous Anon 'oh, its souvenir not souvnear', it's "taut" not "taunt". Other than that, mega kudos!!! 5*'s

Now to go on the hunt for the other car driver. I'm thinking the woman from work Aviedha. But time will tell.

Thank you for writing more!

thought this story might have been dead for a hot second. Always glad to be proven wrong :)

great job and i hope laurel comes back at some point :D

I liked every one of them until this one. It had a different tone that I didn't really care for.

Bravo regardless.

Couple days out of majlr car accident he will pass out getting out of bed.

@Xzy89c1 In movies you see people flat-line and get reanimated and open their eyes within seconds, yet you see nobody complaining about ventricular fibrillation - missing application of adrenalin, ...

Didn’t like the last sentence. I thought he had more couth than that

Bill. S.

"...licked it with from..." Can't count ALL the mistakes!!!

Classic Anna, being super sketch as he puts it. Sucking off and fucking patients to help them recover, even though she's married (like that ever really stopped anyone). What a dedicated nurse!

Why did Anna refer to him as being so average looking when earlier she was basically saying he was so hot? Bit of a contradiction. Make up your mind you crazy, hot, slutty nurse. I do hope she's knocked up with his kid.

A nice curveball of a chapter