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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
no

it doesnt matter. I love this poem, very deep, very good

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
Nicely done

I like this:

~You, my beloved,

have never stopped coming to me,

even through confounding tangles

of the tangible world,~

That's a beautiful statement

bluerainsbluerainsover 19 years ago
now,

in peaceful slumber

I feel the beat of your heart

serenade my dreams *** cause you are my reality....thanks luvs 2 U...from blue

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