All Comments on 'Banging My Mom's Hot Friend Pt. 01'

Your tags promisses a little more than what this (too) short text presented here really contains.

Get an editor to eliminate grammatical errors, and try to put a little more emotion into the next installment of your story.

Too many errors to be readable.

She was 25 and had a 20 year old son?

I presume she'd been married for 25 years, but that is NOT what you wrote. I would think something this simple would be hard to fuck up, and, yet, you did.

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I was 20 years old, and she was married 25 years.

I am looking forward to seeing where it goes.

There are alot of mistakes, you should get yourself an editor. But let's not forget it is your first time writing a story, you're a begginer, you must learn from your mistakes. Keep it up

How could she be 25 and you 20 and she has a kid you never met because he was in college? Was he 2 or 3 when he went to college

Hope everything will be corrected in the next chapter.