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by Anonymous

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by 08/19/04

CV wuz here

CV didn't read it

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by don8765407/25/06

Good reading! But could have been better....

A rape that turned very erotic. This story would be nice in a continuation, perhaps you are "graduating" to more eroticism and even starting a family with this rapist?

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by Anonymous08/31/07

More arousal details

I liked it, but towards the end it felt rushed. I'd probably add some more details about how he aroused her, have more foreplay. Also add more detail about entering her vagina-- give it some more sensation!

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by Anonymous11/04/09

Cool.

Cool, very sexy, but too short.

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