All Comments on 'The Milk Maid's Gift'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
now i am EXTREMELY horny

i love this story

AlinaXAlinaXalmost 7 years agoAuthor

Very cool! - Thanks for commenting. :-)

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623almost 7 years ago
O.M.GAWD!!

This is . . Oh my . . I think I came just from reading this!! This is brilliant! Please keep writing!!!

AlinaXAlinaXalmost 7 years agoAuthor

Thank you!

I loved writing this one - I'm very happy you enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
No present tense please

Please don't write stories in the present tense.

AlinaXAlinaXalmost 5 years agoAuthor

Why not? Technically all 1st person narrative is present tense.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Kim

Wow. Very original story. I came for the porn but ended up staying for the story. Lol.

AlinaXAlinaXover 4 years agoAuthor

I'm particularly fond of this story, so I'm very happy to hear that.

Thanks for reading & commenting!

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I like writing stories that are erotic without sacrificing plot and character. I like pushing consensual boundaries. I like novelty and I like perversity... Anyone wishing to do audio versions of my stories is welcome to do so - but please acknowledge the source and send me a...