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by NaokoSmith07/12/12

There are some interesting passages in here - what a lively imagination! Jumps around a bit, there are too many moments when you think, What's going on now? Eg, how did she end up being his wife? And the festering wound thing starts off the story but isn't explained by the end - if it starts the story it ought to be so significant that it's explained at the end what is going on with that. Fun though!

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