by Maria24
It's funny that she says that right after she's slept with the guy and pulled all that stuff on him. It would've been one hell of a hit even if he didn't have such low self-esteem. What did she expect?
Poor Bob.
I really enjoyed your story, but I didn't like the way it ended.
Self esteem clogging the plumbing of life? . . . The audaciy of publishing a story of sex and complicated outcomes, (pun acknowledged!), Is simply un-Americans and should be outlawed! We must not complicate pleasure with spiritual complexity unless we are willing to risk becomming disgusting, well-balanced people who might develop coping skills from reading a well-written, titulating, (again pun acknowledged) story. Disgusting! What ever happened to mindless good old American porn.
This is a very realistic look at what happens all to often in the lives of many young men and women. Low self esteem is a very real and daunting thing. Whether you continue with these 2 young people or write about others this theme is very good..
Friend zoned for life. Hopefully this will give him enough anger to get him through with her and try to make a little more of himself. If hanging out in bars doesn't work, why keep going?