by irishcatsmeow
like some of the descriptions here:
~Hips undulate
to the rhythm
of her melancholy;~
thats a great stanza and paints a very complex picture
~Beads outline
lush curves.
Rivulets of sweat
drip into
screaming cleavage;~
I have seen screaming cleavage
LOL
and never seen it described that way.
Excellent phrase.
I think your writing is getting better and better.
Keep it up
: )
pierce the calm.
We should all learn to dance so freely. Very sensual and smart. Nice work Irish!
On further study, "Screaming cleavage" is a wonderful phrase.
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