All Comments on 'Gypsy Lady'

by irishcatsmeow

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TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
I really

like some of the descriptions here:

~Hips undulate

to the rhythm

of her melancholy;~

thats a great stanza and paints a very complex picture

~Beads outline

lush curves.

Rivulets of sweat

drip into

screaming cleavage;~

I have seen screaming cleavage

LOL

and never seen it described that way.

Excellent phrase.

I think your writing is getting better and better.

Keep it up

: )

pierce the calm.

lostandfounderlostandfounderover 19 years ago
Very nice poem,

We should all learn to dance so freely. Very sensual and smart. Nice work Irish!

On further study, "Screaming cleavage" is a wonderful phrase.

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 16 years ago
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