All Comments on 'Buggy Lust'

by tungtied2u

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jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years ago
Snicker.

A playful little snicker. The kind of snicker that says I think I saw that same canyon, that same sun.

A snicker is a nice thing in the morning. Thanks.

thegirlfriday11thegirlfriday11over 19 years ago
well

that was very, very sexy

nice images

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnover 19 years ago
Love this!

The rewrite makes soooo much more sense. The meaning of the final line didn't even hit my dirty mind before. This is brilliant, fun ride.

ReltneReltneover 19 years ago
She

The the change to 3rd person "she" in the last line glares at me.

normal jeannormal jeanover 19 years ago
in that context

I do not seee "she" as a mistake in this poem. Its very sexy, lotta fun, enjoyed :)

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Great warning to readers:

Curves Ahead. Well done, tt2u!

DanaQtDanaQtover 19 years ago
I had a....

Hot little tickling, giggle from this read. The ending was fab!

Thanks for sharing!

Dana

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