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Snicker.
A playful little snicker. The kind of snicker that says I think I saw that same canyon, that same sun.
A snicker is a nice thing in the morning. Thanks.
well
that was very, very sexy
nice images
Love this!
The rewrite makes soooo much more sense. The meaning of the final line didn't even hit my dirty mind before. This is brilliant, fun ride.
She
The the change to 3rd person "she" in the last line glares at me.
in that context
I do not seee "she" as a mistake in this poem. Its very sexy, lotta fun, enjoyed :)
Great warning to readers:
Curves Ahead. Well done, tt2u!
I had a....
Hot little tickling, giggle from this read. The ending was fab!
Thanks for sharing!
Dana
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