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by Anonymous08/22/04

Don't stop the story there!

More please! We need to know what happend to them next!!! It was a GREAT story, hope to read more of yours like this one.

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by Denkkar08/19/06

What happens next?

This has a lot of potential, would really like to see what happens next. The way it ends right now is far too abrupt :(

Does the journey take us to a realm of hell? What does it mean that the woman is "going home"? Please tell us!

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