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by Anonymous

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by Asgard08/22/04

Quite different, thanks

slow start, but then it took off, I love the way you built up the story, and it got quite hot, inviting in the last comments to further installments and I personally would like to know there this story develops, so be so kind and continue!

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by Anonymous08/22/04

BEST STORY EVER ON LITEROTICA!!!!!!

This is absolutely the BEST story ever presented on Literotica!!! And.....the author put some HAIR on the pussy too!!! Goddamn a woman with a shaved bush!!!

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by Anonymous08/22/04

A thinking house?

A house planning it's future? Ridiculous - but wonderfully well done! I'm looking forward to ch 02........
Lukas

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by 08/22/04

Inspired piece of writing.

Butt terrible spelling.

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by Tall_cool_one08/22/04

Outstanding

An absolutely brilliant idea for a story. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next victim's chronicle.

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by taylorbear08/22/04

Great writing

This is a wellwritten story that contains several literary suggestions: mythical, gothic, romantic, lust, etc.

Keep up the good work. The sex scenes were very graphic without being pornographic.

taylorbear

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by Anonymous08/22/04

Well Done!

Frankly this was so well-written and thought provoking that I didn't notice any misspellings. Having read "The Hauntintg" and "Rose Red", a couple of main stream tales of conscious houses, I am a fan of houses with thoughts and motives. But this is my first time reading of a good house, as compared with the above two evil houses. By all means please continue the story ...

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by sherlock4008/23/04

Excellent story

I hope the term procreation comes true for some of the women. This is a great story. I would like to thank you for your time and effort in writing this story.

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by Anonymous08/23/04

Loved it please continue

Please continue this great story line

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