All Comments on 'Encrypted'

Well written in general, but with a few minor mistakes.

For some reason I do not find myself moved by this poem. It should be better than I find it. Perhaps it is just me.

Is "due" correct?

Enjoyed the poems allusion in reference to "house". I especially liked the 8th stanza as it had some strong and fresh phrasing.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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