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erotic and beautiful
you have such a way with words, totally draws me in! thanku xxx
whatever
I am ever-so-sick-and-tired of stories told in the 2nd person! Stylistically, this is abysmal crap. Pleeeeeeeeeeease! No more!
Absolutely fantastic
Some wonderful decriptive touches that made me feel like I was really there. Another excellent story by Matriarch. Keep them coming!
extremely erotic
your story made me soooo excited
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I can only say I totally agree with all the previous comments..including those of Mathildezz, although her 25 rating was ridiculous.
Dear Mathildezz
Thank you for your comment on my latest offering. And no, I'm not being sarcastic. I always try to make time to respond to comments on my work, positive or negative, provided I have an address to write to.
You, like any other reader, are perfectly entitled to your opinion on mine or any other writer's work. I am sorry that you found it of such poor standard. I do not profess to be a professional writer, or particularly talented; I write the way that works best for me, in the hope that some of Lit's readers will enjoy my offerings. I am well aware that my style will not appeal to everyone,your comment proves my point.
Regards, Matriarch.
;)
Beautiful sweetie. Even better the second (or third or fourth) time around. :)
Kisses,
Rebecca
Psssssssssstttttttt
Lovely as always,dear. Meet you on the porch at 10PM your time.
I saw...
...you in the garden! Nanner-nanner! Sexy story, lady.
~lucky
p.s. Am I the only one that can tell from the first paragraph whether a story is written in a verb-tense I can tolerate? :confused:
Nothing bettah
than lovin in the moonlight. nice snapshot, curious to see what the next picture will be. advance film and begin shooting please.
*awesome*
v~
Wonderful
Lovely, sexy and sweet...A Snapspot of a very erotic moment.
Fantastic story, Mat!
Love,
Honey
you take
me with you on the tides of your writing. Mmm beautiful moment. so erotic yet painfully intimate.
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