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by Anonymous

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by Liar09/06/04

Interresting

Is this full of double entendre or what? "You see me molten beneath your tongue" could be sexual, sychological, political, or something else entirely. Good pic and presentation.

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by Colleen Thomas09/06/04

Ice is made for melting

:)

-Colly

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by lucky-E-leven09/07/04

I'm melting...

The ice at your core doesn't stand a chance against your warmth. Excellent poem, fantastic image...great overall presentation. I'm feeling it.

~lucky

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by Anonymous09/07/04

wonder image..

as well as the poetry.

i think after love burns ya..it freezes you..i know about this poem all too well.

lovely piece hun!

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by 09/07/04

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Steamy and slick erotica. Enjoyed the art, it went nicely with the poem.

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by ABSTRUSE09/07/04

*wink*

I can relate to that.

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by china-doll11/29/04

Hmmmm...

I think I would like a chance to melt your ice. ;)

Lovely peice Min.

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by LadyJeanne03/06/05

Shivery

to the core. This is short, but packs a powerful punch. Forgive my alliteration, please. I really like this. Thanks, LJ

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by Honey12304/19/05

Hot hot baby!

I doubt anything could be cold within you or near you!!!

~Honey

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by duddle14612/26/06

fire

Ice at the core - passions like molten lava with a sensuous fire to burn away the dross. The poem and illustration ties this rendering up in an excellent way.

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by LeBroz02/05/07

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Fire and ice; if it's fire you see then it's ice that rules.

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by LeBroz02/05/07

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Fire and ice; if it's fire you see then it's ice that rules.

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by tazz31704/22/12

THE CAPACITY FOR LOVE

varies in individuals. TK U MLJ LV NV

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