All Comments on 'Submission in the Sun and Sand Ch. 03-05'

No, this is not a good story, I read the first page and skipped to the end and it did not get any better

I disagree with the other comment. I like this story a LOT and wish you would write more about Amanda and Carrie.

Not a fan of the story at all. I didn't get any emotional connection from the Domme. I think she was more attached to her dog than her sub. I've read some really great D/s stories, but this one missed the mark. Sorry to write a bad review, but instead of pulling me into the domination push and pull this story made me cringe.

Yeah there is no connection between the characters making it a terrible read. No build up, no suspense, no feeling. The fact that they have no real relationship to speak of and she pimps her out the first chance she gets is just aweful.

I disagree with all the other comments this is an amazing and sexy story please please continue!!!

Sub frenzy?!

And why does there have to be a completely random het encounter?

I adore petplay, thank you x

That is no ending to a story....that is a teaser to the next installment......disappointing...I loved the story, but leaving it there. That made me wonder why I had bothered, other than you are a talented writer and I enjoy your work.