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This is about Dulce

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/25/12

What happened?

I liked chapter one very much, but I see it was written 8 years ago ... what happened to the rest?

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by dawid150105/08/12

Yeah

I also would like to know! Where is the rest?Damn! I hate it to read unfinished stories.

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by chilleywilley10/14/12

Hard to comment

Not sure what this is. True story? Essay on your experiences? It is feel good, but no really a story, and a story was what I expected.

Chilley

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by studebakerhawk11/15/13

Decent, if it's an opening chapter.

Not so good, if it's the whole story. No conflict, therefore no resolution, therefore no real plot.

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