All Comments on 'Saltwater Revival'

by sandspike

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DustystarDustystarover 19 years ago
Partners to the End Times

"release your sins in the salt

partner of tequila and redemption"

I don't even know what to say, Sandy. This was so evocative, moving, powerful. Does 'wow' sum things up?

May I be so bold to suggest that in my humble opinion I think this is your best piece to date?

annaswirlsannaswirlsover 19 years ago
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you did it

much enjoyed!

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
it took a second read

for me to realize how good this poem is.

lostandfounderlostandfounderover 19 years ago
How the hell...

did I miss this the first time through?

"tequila and redemption"

I wish I had thought of that.

A deep water poem. Great work.

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