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fine story
Hi, logophile
I liked your story a lot, and look forward to more submissions from you.
freakin awesome
that was one of the hottest stories ive ever read. keep up the good work.(btw i did it twice to this one)
Keep up the efforts!
Great story! I looking foward to more from you.
Great First Story
Looking forward to more!
Absolutely
hot! Sensuous and honest. I very much related to both characters. Thanks for the great story!
So hot and so believeable!
Written as only a woman could! For your 1st submission it was awesome, do continue your writing style is excellent.
Very good first story!
You are an artist, writer, lover of women, and food! Its so good as a first post, I have to believe you have written elsewhere before this. Keep them comming! -Lv
great story
Excellent story loved it.
Incredibly Well Written!!!
Fresh Fruit is one of the most exciting and sensual stories we have read! Logophile you have style.
My wife has reread Fresh Fruit several times and still comments on how wonderful it is.
Can't wait for more from logophile!
an amazing first submission!
Should be required reading for anyone contemplating writing a lesbian story...remarkable!
Very nice, logophile!
I loved the way this was written: almost like a page from a diary of a woman who has just experienced something very special. Very hot, and very sensual. I will read it again!
(is this beach anywhere near Daytona?)
voyeurism, lesbianism, and fruit!
HOT HOT HOT. the only thing i would say is that, i want more. awesome job!
what happens the next day???
tutti frutti
simply loved the context & style of your writing...can't wait for more of your stories...
hot & feminine
Hot women and fruit! Your words painted, rather than told a story. Very good, very good indeed!
yummm...
got any oranges? I can pretend...if you can ignore the beard that is *grin*
Really Hot
This was a really hot story, written like, I believe, a dirty story should be written
This was your first story?
Amazing! It was so well written and so hot. I will be reading more of your work.
Very Sweet & Sexy
Thank you for writing sexy, sweet stories. The two I have read feel real and show caring partners. Please keep writing.
peek vs peak
peek - to sneak a look at
peak - mountain top (n) or to come to the top of something (v)
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