All Comments on 'XXXanth Novels: Dana 3'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Need more!

This story is really short, but I feel like this was a first outing as far as the author is concerned. Yeah, there's some kinky mermaid sex, but... it's not really mermaids having sex, but rather transformed mermaids; which is kinda a let down.

The human girl just gets some starfish and an octopus, but the mers all just bang each other after changing into human form? Where's the fun in that!? Seriously, I expected some lesbian action or some teasing with the human from the mers while the males had their way with the ladies.

Do expand this story; it's good for the most part, but it needs a lot more content! I mean, mermaids are supposed to be seductive towards humans; so show it!

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