All Comments on 'Lauren's Predicament Ch. 01'

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JadestoyJadestoyalmost 7 years ago
Bogus

When schools out she tells her parents and goes to the real cops

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
5 stars

Great 1st chapter; please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More Real Than Most People Know

Great start, keep it going. This story is more real than most people realize. Things like this do happen in real life. Well written. Looking forward to the continuation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More please

Interested to see how this develops

HaydenDLinderHaydenDLinderabout 6 years ago
Too damned short! But definitely 5 stars:)

Loved this one.

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