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nice one brother!
What a fucking classic, from the description of the girl- "half Japanese and white around 5'2 around 100 pounds long dark hair and green eyes and very exotic looking," to the" big dark brown nipples that stuck out like pencil erasers all the time", I was entranced! And the way the character raped her was just perfect: "So here I was with my dick in her ass slowly going down and slipping out of her ass starting to wonder does she know this is me or what."
It just got better and better, and hooked me in with a big silly grin on my face, quickly getting aroused despite myself. The icing on the cake came with the brilliant way you handled the conclusion, doing away with the over-rated and ridiculous trappings of grammar and punctuation and just telling it the way it is. I've gotta quote it for anyone who might be reading this, it's brilliant:
"As I was standing there in her doorway looking at her she looked and smelled like sex she walked up to me and said good thing he left early or you would not have got to fuck me like you did."
Fucking bravo man, bravo!
You're one of the few good hegemonic males left in this world and you fucking rock!
mmmmmmmmmmm delicious
woohoo that was hot! well done, hope you continue
Great story man fucking superb
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm absolutely fucking brill
Aa Hot Stopry - but...
Lots of grammer errors...would have rated higher if you had done a little proof reading.
Two Nuts Empty
Great story blew my load twice reading this story. It could use some proofing but other than that it was great.
good but..
everythin was good cept the man cum fantasy... u might be a bit of a fag there bud.
Good reading!
So did you knock her up, or what? Maybe she quits going out at night so the two of you can keep fucking?
Erros My Ass
Grammatical errors hell. It's hard to type while your jacking off.
WOW
Nice story. She sounds so fucking HOT!
*sad trombone*
Last line ruined it.
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