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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Nice story, but

No one is that naive!

SubtextSubtextalmost 7 years agoAuthor
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Really! Don't people still believe in Adam and Eve and the Virgin Mary?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
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They do indeed. Others believe that the entire universe was created by some sort of a "big bang". Yet more believe that strange exotic creatures called "dinosaurs'" once roamed this very planet we call our own. And then there are those who have both positive and negative views about changes in the planet's climate...

The revolving door turns and turns.

Good story by the way. The balance beam really comes into it's own as a character (albeit an inanimate one).

SubtextSubtextalmost 7 years agoAuthor
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Thanks. Yes, that balance beam is a rather flat character!

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