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What a truly great short story...
I've never had a story, on here, truly touch me as well as turn me on. I really can't quite say enough... fantastic!!! The dandelions are great imagery... the vulnerability of Anna... the caring in the old man... i felt like i could smell those ham and eggs... everything felt so real.
Please write again.
- Will
Lovely
Just the one word is enough, I think.
Some more would be very nice.
Lukas
Wonderful story
Sweetly intimate and touching. Please write more!
Such a delight.
The wisdom of the narrator and Anna's hopeful innocence make for a wonderful story. Couldn't be better.
Thank you
I've been a fan since reading 'the Tear'. This story was not as touching as that but it was still moving. Thank you.
Personal relevance
Given that I just turned 50, and plan to wed my 18 year old love soon, this story had personal relevance to me. Yes, love really does ignore age at times. The most touching part for me was the man's acknowledgement that he was rescued more than she was, for that is true in my case as well. Thank you for the beautiful story, it will be one I will reread often, and plan to share with my new wife.
Hand and egg omelet
I hope she never made you another one.
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