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Rites of Passage Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/31/04

Loving it. Waiting for part 2.

Story's real good so far. And poised tantalisingly.

Part 2 soon. Please!

- JT

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by sack12/04/04

excellent introduction....

I learned a lot about paintball, too! You write well and we have a taste of what might happen in part 2, which I am looking forward to reading!

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